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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
C'mon....and Read What You Wrote

The story is a little vague and needed some fleshing out! But Jokesuit ...read your stories over before submitting them PLEASE! With a lot of THE"s put in where needed and other small error's corrected your story would be much more readable.

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Guy that enjoys women. I am open minded to various subjects, but avoid incest and animal fantasies. Those are just not my thing. I believe that the best roleplays and chats are mutually enjoyable and collaboration is a must in all scenarios.