All Comments on 'Making Music'

Nice build, even better climax...more of the same plse....

the sexual element of your story is quite good, but your music class needs serious work if you intend on continuing to include it. I study music, and have never encountered a class where I must not only learn historical elements, but also learn to play multiple instruments, its just not the way things work in a collegiate music course sequence.

everything else was well done!