All Comments on 'Making My Niece Cry Uncle Ch. 04'

I'm pretty sure there's a threesome in the works. Can't wait to hear about her girlfriend more.

this story is really good i like it alot.

Really good story. Keep up the great work.

I came twice while reading this series. Thanks!

with beautifully depicted characters - the feeling of wonder of a young woman discovering the full magic of a passionate forbidden relationship is just great! OK, so you've other irons in the fire, but please, let them cool, because this one's HOT!

waiting for ch: 05...maybe her friend can join in on the fun ??

Very good story. You go at a great pace and your stories are always wonderful. Keep writing. I can't wait for what cums next.

Great story I Loved it and cannot wait for more. will be waiting

Your writing style and pacing are great. Thanks for a hot, HOT and well written series. I am 56 and have ben having a sexual relationship for the last couple years with my 38 year old niece. I only wish that we had started when she was younger like in your story.

Please, keep these coming!

I have been fucking my niece, 22 years my junior, for 26 years now. We live together happily. When we make love I still get the same thrill that I did the first time I entered her. She was 19 and curious. She has never had another guy. I love her and she me. A wonderful relationship ...

AllSo Twisted has crafted a wonderful pair of characters in this lovely tale. Kristie sounds like a typical high school graduate who is trying to make money for college. Her Uncle Mike, just a dozen years older, suddenly finds himself the object of her mischievous and sexy intentions. This is a story for those who believe gentleness in love-making as the best way for an experienced lover to teach an inexperienced lover. When this author writes more of this story, I will be happy to read it.

very nice, I look forward to seeing more of this amazing story unfold, please dont keep us waiting too long

"What if your folks call Jenna's place?"

"She'll say I'm in the bathroom then call me on my cell phone."

Why would her folks call Jenna's place rather than call her cell? Just to check up on her? If so, a "she'll call you back" response wouldn't make them any more trusting.

No big deal, just distracted me enough to take me out of the story for a second. Maybe better with the two lines omitted since any increase in exposition at that point would disrupt the flow?

Where oh where is the rest of the story

Loved it! Absolutely awesome :). Smooth ending, though another chapter or three with him introducing her to a few new things she's never done before would be great too! I think my lovely niece needs to cut my yard all the time, oh! I need someone to clean my house for me every week too!! ;). Whats that? My niece wants to move in the spare room to keep me company so Im not depressed? Well, ok, if you really think it will help.... Wonder how much of a fit the family will throw if I marry her, hmmmm.... ;)

Absolutely sucking fucking wonderful, steaming hot. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Very enjoyable. Maybe another chapter?