All Comments on 'Making New Friends'

by OldeGold

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peyskippeyskipover 7 years ago
Hot fun!

Very nice! Please continue!

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 7 years ago
The beginning of a beautiful friendship

I like this one. You included just enough detail about these characters before leaping into the action. The dialog sounded strange to my ears, but that's probably due to the British/American discrepancy. The story is told in a realistic and believable fashion, which adds to the excitement.

I also like the fact that you didn't end the story in the bedroom. You gave us a glimpse of the aftermath and a teaser for the next story.

Jolly good work, ol' chap!

Impo_64Impo_64over 7 years ago
I liked it...

I liked it...When married couples are totally in sintony, they can try some adventures without putting in cause their marriage...This is the case...3*

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sorry to interject

The voice of reason, but its a very destructive relationship that will kill several relatioships and make a lot of barristers wealthy

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great depiction of animal fucking with friends. Just what most married couples dream of.

Not sure what the plot was, but I got the point. Congratulations, I guess.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
English

If they were English, he was a cuck and she was a whore even before the swinging. SJ liked it though.

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