by OldeGold
I like this one. You included just enough detail about these characters before leaping into the action. The dialog sounded strange to my ears, but that's probably due to the British/American discrepancy. The story is told in a realistic and believable fashion, which adds to the excitement.
I also like the fact that you didn't end the story in the bedroom. You gave us a glimpse of the aftermath and a teaser for the next story.
Jolly good work, ol' chap!
I liked it...When married couples are totally in sintony, they can try some adventures without putting in cause their marriage...This is the case...3*
The voice of reason, but its a very destructive relationship that will kill several relatioships and make a lot of barristers wealthy
Not sure what the plot was, but I got the point. Congratulations, I guess.
If they were English, he was a cuck and she was a whore even before the swinging. SJ liked it though.