All Comments on 'Making Porn: A Mom & Son LUST Story'

Verbose !

Great story!!!!!!! More would be fabulous!!!!!

Which of his sister's holes will he fill first??

Well, a hot threesome with son and daughter, then a hot orgy with her friend and their threesome. Very Hot!

Pretty good, except for there was a lot of build up in the very beginning of the story finally didn’t get to the good stuff until the third page. There’s just nothing like a hot mom getting fucked by her son his sperm pouring into her room as mother and son exchange body fluids! Keep it going let’s get the daughter involved

Definitely needs a sequel but needs to include filming themselves! Very hot story! Loved it.

Yes please make part 2

More please! I’m dying to read the story with the daughter involved. Then maybe friends getting together for a large party. Carol and her son with this 3 person family sounds hot!

Nagyon tetszik a történet és feltétlen folytatni kell a lányával és utána a segítő barátnővel és a fiával, ebből részből következik, hogy ezt kell tovább írni. Köszönöm és várom a folytatást. Minden nap megnézem

338. Very good and deserves a sequel at least with the daughter and perhaps with the plotting friend. and her sone.

Pls continue Parts 2 and 3!

very good sequels wood be well read lol

Wow,is there a second part from where the daughter shows up?

OMG! So hot! Please continue this story!

Oh yes so hot and I’m sure the adding of the other family member will take us all over the edge

I want to read how the daughter gets involved

Most definitely want to read about daughters reaction and involvement !

I was less than impressed when I began reading, then . . . . . .

Well that was a very sexy story! Looking forward to part 2, 3, and 4. 😈😎

Eine heiße, sehr gelungene Geschichte. Wie sich die Beiden Geil näher kommen und sie Dir aufkommende Geilheit zu mehr führt, einfach total aufgeilend

Wann wird die Tochter / Schwester mit ins geile Boot geholt?

I loved it. Great writing, you made incest natural. I hope you write more with your daughter involved.

Can’t wait to see how daughter fits in.

Get the neighbors involved and do some porn videos. Make a fortune! Lol

Great story, would love to read more.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. I would like to see this become a series. Character development of the mother was good. Liked the sexual epiphany of the mother. The sensual intimacy, erotic passion and deep feeling of love and respect between mother and son was wonderful. This is now I would expect an incestuous love to be.

It would be nice if if the next part will be coming soon.

Great story and soo hot to read! Please write more soon!

I wish you had made this an illustrated story. Then you could have had a picture illustrating the phrase "I shook her head".

Just finished the story and I cant believe there isn't a part 2. Please consider making one.

very hot looking forward to part 2

Great story...needs to continue with the sister!!!

WHY CAN I NOT PUT ALL OF THE CODE IN????? It only lets me use 4 when I try to log in as a user.

Please continue this hot story, my poor cock is twitching in anticipation of how many ways this might continue! I love the way you write, your mind takes me along with you're amazingly sexy literary journeys.

Very hot please continue with the daughter too

I know that you are a prolific writer, I am wondering if this just didn't mesh with what you were wanting, or other stories took precedence?

Please continue this story!

Wow what a great story. Yes please continue the story I am so looking forward to part two.

Please finish this story. It's real good and would like to see where and how it ends.

next chapter please

But then again I like all your stories. Would love to see a sequel on this one.

I have also an idea. Make the daughter the cameraman/woman to get more graphic shots of them having sex.

oh holy hell that was hot, like all your other works, never a disappointment.

You've got a 4.75 rating and almost 350 favorite the story. Everyone has asked for the sequel with the daughter. You said "To be continued if enough people are interested." . How many people saying they are interested will it take for the sequel to be written and published?

My aunty Anne and I enacted out this scene with me as her sissymaid neice

Wonderful start to a mind bending orgasm. Please include horned up daughter into a ball churning threesome. Want to see mom and daughter eating each other out while son fucks both. Once had a t

reesome with my wife and her horny 16 year old sister. Watching them eat each other out as as I slid my cock into them was the best ever!

I hope you do continue the stroy to evolve the sister that would be great and hopefully she will find a man that would enjoy there new family fun

Son gives it to mom in the ass and the daughter gets worked into the story somehow.

I had to stop reading the story and begin to fuck my wife while she called me her son and I called her my mom. She called my name and said , "Fuck me son" and I replied "I'm cuming mom". It was a wonderful time in the sack with my mom.

Excellent and erotic incest. I am ready for another good fucking with my little sissy transvestite mother fucking bitch.

first two pages were superb erotic writing but the build was so well done, the climax fizzled, the last page was a huge letdown. boom, it was over for me after this needless foreshadowing, what happened to the struggle?

"No words were spoken, and yet we both knew what was about to happen"

Silkstoclongslover you are a very good writer. I'll let you imagine how very turned on reading this made me. Not to mention the huge happy ending.

More Please... thank Brad

5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 please add next chapter with daughter

Bring on the next level

More please!!!!

Would love to read more of the story!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Love the story a lot. You should cuntinue with it. This is a real fantasy of mine and you wrote it masterfully.

With the daughter. It was on my mind from the time of her description about how sexy her kids were.

Awesome writing

Really really into part 2 plz

This is just great! You KNOW the daughter has to become part of this!

So...MORE!

[thanks!!]

Yes, more please!!!!

Love your writing, Jasmine! Don't ever stop.

JASMINE:

I ALSO JUST FINISHED READING :BACKSEAT MOMMY" YOU HAD SOME IDEAS FOR ADDITIONAL CHAPTERS, GO FOR IT, MOM CAN MOVE CLOSER TO THE COLLEGE AND BECOME THE HOUSE MOTHER/SLUT FOR HIS FRAT.

ALL OF THE TITLES YOU SUGGESTED ARED GREAT AS USUAL.

GO FOR IT

MIKE

JASMINE:

, YOU ARE AMAZING EACH STORY IS BETTER THAN THE NEXT, AND YOU ALWAYS SEEM TO LEAVE THE OPENING FOR THE SEQUEL. T YOUNG GIRL IN THE MOVIE JUST HAPPENS TO BE THE DAUGHTER, AND YOUR DAUGHTER JUST HAPPENS TO WALK IN AT THE END. WONDERFUL. YOU CAN ADD CAROL AND CAROL AND SIMON TO THE MIX AND POSSIBLY THE OTHER GIRLFRIENDS.

MIKE

Great start to this story please keep it going. 5 stars! Wet and still need more.

You can't end it there you have to have the sister and mom and son get together and maybe the brother and sister and then the mom catches them and she gets mad and she makes them fuck.for her great story line love keep writing

I thought the sister was going to come in when he shot all over mom and lick it off her while milking ever last drop out of him.

Same old bullshit boring.

I enjoyed the story would like to see more.

Holy fuck, SSL, you are my favorite fuck author and you are really scoring again with this series! I am past 70 and cummed twice reading this - and my cock stays hard!!!!! I desperately need you to get another piece written so the whole fucking family gets into wildly fucking each other. This is probably on the "cusp" of being the most outrageous incest special in the history of writing - but you do these badass stories so fucking well you can pull off anything you can dream up and keep your readers' cocks erect and pussies wet.

FUCKON, darlin'!!!!!!

I would like some more please!

Yes, you need to do a follow up story with the daughter included.

5 stars. Needs a sequel with son mum and daughter

I absolutely love this story

i bet i could actually relate it to real life

Go on to the daughter scene

This was good. Is there a sequel?

That ending though :')

We want to see the daughter involved

It's like those great movies you see and just know they left it set up for the sequel. So we await chapter two, and then there is always the friend who lent the movie, What's her story and will everyone get together to celebrate??

Please do another with the daughter

Amazing, so very sexy.

Silk, I have read every word you have published and loved every one. Some more than others but even the worst one is better than most authors best. The quality of your character development, the depth of your storylines, and the emotions they provke combine in a way that has given me hours of enjoyment. You have opened my eyes to genres that previously have held little to no interest to me, and for that, thank you. I can think of no higher praise to an author than that. And now to the reason I feel compelled to comment after years of visiting this site. Silk you have allowed me into your thoughts, and I like to think that you take some of your inspiration from life experiences. You were somehow able to pull this story from my history. It was me outside the window with my 8mm camera, this was awhile ago. It was my best friend that was enjoying his mother. While it didn't play out quite as quickly as your story, it was the second time I got caught that we talked. That was at the beginning of summer and it took until the end of summer before she willingly played for my camera. Alas I don't have a sister but I have always wished I did. Ok, I think you get the point. I will be watching for more of this storyline to see how closely this story mirrors my experiences. I thank you again Silk, for all your hard work. I would also like to thank you too, for all the rock hard erections and glorious orgasms.

Fuck Yes, SSL - PLEASE cuntinue this masterpiece of fuckdom!!!!! Your stories keep my tired old cock rock hard until the end or until I cum before the end! You must be the hottest piece of ass that ever took a hard cock up your pussy the way you dash this outrageously fucking hot stuff off!!!! I can't imagine that you make up something you know nothing about so I have to assume you have experienced what you write about - and That means I wish I could experience it with you and have the wildest fuck of all time for me!

Keep writing it and I'll keep reading it, masturbating and cumming all over my computer screen! FUCK - your stuff is far and away the sexiest and hottest on Literotica!

Please add another chapter and have son fuck mother and sister in all three holes.

Holy fuck yes you need to continue this fuck tale!!!!!!!! I LOVE incest stories. Your stuff, SSL, is, without question, some of the most erection and ejaculation inducing stuff on the internet!!!!!! You must be the hottest fuck in the history of sex to come up with all this fucking nasty stuff - I just wish we could find a way to unite our sex organs and find out just what kind of a fuck we could generate!

Sweet pound Mommy's cunt Sonny an deposit a few BIG LOADS in her... Baby maker for Good measure .

We need the mother, daughter, Carol and son to get it on.

Yes pleas continue and great tease at the end

Very good start now continue and get daughter and your friend Carol and her son as well.

Please add more chapters to the story.

Great story, Needs to be more chapters.

You have to finish

You must continue this story!!

This needs to continue

Continue the story!

Definitely continue!

Please continue the story.

Love your stories defo need more of this one

Always love your writing. Please continue

I will make it 50....please add chapters 2 through 10. Loved it!!!

Well I don't think you need another one telling you to continue the story, since there's almost 50 comments already, but in case you haven't understood the message: please, please do another part! Or more than one!