by Sean Renaud
EROTIC---I hope I never encounter the creep who thinks this is erotic
if this turns you on than you are as bad as the ugly people you dream up. Stand up in a group of people and read this out loud. Than look at the disgust on their faces. Your a ugly man inside, glad I don't know you.
The basic idea of this story is not new but the writing is good and Jermaine's character is interesting. However, the family's characters bust the whole thing.
Such cooperation and enthousiasm could not exist in this world. I understand it is a fantasy, but in my mind it still need to be a little credible to be interesting.
It's fun thinking about the possibilities for next week! Or perhaps the women want to be full time on call sluts for him. Bruce is a cuckhold, but his humiliation might be even better if he has to suck Jermaine's cock and take him in his ass as well. The possibilities for his humiliation and their gleeful participation in their own degradation are almost limitless.