All Comments on 'Making the Grade'

I liked the story, but it ended too soon. You needed more sex in there. I nknow it's hard to judge...I often don't put enough sex in my stories either.

I enjoyed reading your story, I can't wait to read the next part.

I agree with the one comment, you need to give more details. You have details leading to the act of intercourse. Spent a little bit more on the act of love making.