All Comments on 'Making the Watermelon Queen'

of pure animal sex. LOVE it!

After the action in the plane, I am surprised she was ready for another week of action,the last time I was pounded like that I was walking very funny for a couple of days.However an awesome story it left me very damp and ready.

Luv Jenny Cook

I love your Dylan James series. I hope you continue this story with Brandi for a little while longer. It will be intriguing if he finally found his match.

Very well written, great discriptions, super-hot. 1st of your stories I've read, not the last.

Thanks

Bev

I have read almost all of your stories and by far, this is your best!

The greatest story I've ever read. It made me so fucking wet. I don't know if I'll ever be able to read another author, they just won't be able to measure up to this story. Xxxxohhhh god that was good!

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"5*" !

This was so hot and as Dylan turned Brandi up and out sexually, I was right there with them! I really enjoyed this opus to flying and fucking the friendly skies! So many orgasms and so much jism! Can’t wait to read more of your extensive catalog!

Not only is this chapter in the Dylan James saga exceptionally well-written, the character of Brandi is one of the more fascinating anywhere. Indeed, a whole series alone could be created involving Brandi, as there is nothing beyond the talent of the author. The combination of beauty, sexiness, modesty, and sincere religiosity, is not only fascinating, but a combination rarely encountered anywhere on the site. This story is a Five Stars story only because more stars cannot be given.

There's no such thing as a redeye heading westbound.