All Comments on 'Making Up is Hard to Do'

Bring on the bi action, too.

Wow, a very nice little third chapter. I'm glad you used the two hotties this time, Alex and Jason. All that was missing was some boy on boy action, it seemed like Jason was up for it?

SO now your Marine is a willing cuckold. A man for whom honor is all important. Just didn't work. Not a single clever, interesting or entertaining part to it. Sure as heck wasn't erotic. As it turns out, not a single decent character to root for. They're all a bunch of cheating liars. Alex should have taken some pictures and gotten a divorce. Maybe gotten primary custody. His bitch wife sure wouldn't have wanted all her friends and family to see her fucking a 19 year old boy. A complete waste of time to read.

Should have explored the guys going at it. Both were interested. Still a hot story even though the whole premise made no sense