All Comments on 'Making Yasmini My Slut'

I'd just prefer more closure to the very abrupt ending.

Ostensibly this is an incest story with forced sex overtones. It's true the narrator would not take no for an answer. Yet there was a wonderful & fairly plausible twist that the sister in law desired & even loved the narrator all along. This was written pretty well as is. Yet with more romance as the story advanced it could have really been special.

I liked how lonely & vulnerable she was shown to be under that bitchy front. I know it would make things awkward for family get-togethers but the main two characters belong together & should stop sneaking around. If there is a sequel, I'd enjoy seeing that happen. Pretty good read, no matter what. I thank the author.

Absolute drivel.

She is the best

I hope that there is going to be a sequel!

Hot and erotic but still loving.

After Yasmini divorces her husband, it would be fantastic if the two sisters and him live together since his wife can't fuck anymore. He would have two women to love, and one woman to fuck as much as he needed.

Yasmini could have a lot of children and her sister could help raise them when she was at home

Thanks for the read.

good...but too emotional

The author could do with reading up on human biology, especially female human biology.

And written by an American ignoramus with a prick like a pinky, hence all the "my huge cock" references. This sucked so bad, in so many ways. No stars

this story is about rape.. plain and simple. i can only read a few paragraphs before i was completely disgusted.

https://www.literotica.com/s/impregnating-my-sister-n-law