by TheNH
Imagery of a 'fully shaven' male model's unwrinkled genetalia, was erotic albeit quite impractical, in that concluding 'full penetration' scenario!
Suggest your model/writer ventures further, into forced domestic 'CFNM' situations, where he can experience those orgasmic fulfillments he seeks whilst entertaining his audience of female peers? Personally; building-up natural male reluctance to orgasm publicly was erotically described, but when introduced to sexual positions with one naked female model, posed levels of practical difficulty for both participants? Far better to suggest the '69' situation with male genitalia fully visable at every stage prior to his 'mutual' orgasmic relief. Look forward to 'practical' improvements, in chapter 2? EG: Require her model's sperm sample for genetic analysis, for scientific or 'female health' reasons!
Very good and every guys fantasy to be the "Model". Make it into many chapters? Throw the Teacher a Bone?
That was an excellent start. I can't wait to read the next chapter.