All Comments on 'Male Sub Ch. 01'

Hot idea and writing...keep it up, I'm hard!!

Captivating story.

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But I wish Brandy would have punished Carla for her presumptuous behavior. Giving her a spanking in front of Allen would have been appropriate, IMO. Carla should have been bent over in front of Allen with her legs spread and tits hanging. That would have compensated Allen some for his undeserved lashing.

I almost got off while reading this. I'm looking forward to further chapters.

A great dom/sub relationship.