All Comments on 'Mamacaca'

Was okay, till the scat shit crap

Please Do not include any SCAT ever again.... Damn I have vomit again......

if I had remembered my first year Spanish I would have been warned by the title.

caca indeed

This story was really hot until you had to turn to scat. You had a good thing going until you added scat and turned off everybody. Take this crap writing out of incest/taboo and put it in the filthiest classification that Lit has. Does not belong here. You are one sick motherfucker.F

Just a few minor problems with the language that are easily overlooked. It was a good start.

But then it all turned to shit.

Take it out of incest and give the Anglos a chance.

You should have put the scat warning at the beginning so I could have skipped this altogether! Gross!!!

THIS TARTED OUT LIKE A GREAT INCEST STORY THEN YOU DECIDED TO GO ANOTHER DIRECTION AND GROSS EVERYONE OUT. IT MIGHT BE FINE FOR YOU TO PARTICIPATE IN THIS TYPE OF BEHAVIOR OR FETISH, BUT THE MAJORITY OF THE READERS DO NOT. IF YOU DECIDE TO CHANGE YOUR STYLE AND GO BACK TO "CLEAN" INCEST STORIES I MAY TAKE A CHANCE AND READ ANOTHER. I WOULD SUGGEST THAT YOU REMOVE THE SCAT AND TELL EVERYONE AND THEY MAY GIVE YOU ANOTHER TRY AND READ YOUR STORIES. YOU MAY EVEN GET A FIVE STAR RATING AND GOOD COMMENTS.

This story was great, right up to the "bonus scene" - bonus, my hairy ass! Luckily, I (unlike one other person leaving a comment) DID remember my early Spanish, and so I was on the lookout, ready to bail at the first sign of the story 'going south of the border'.

I really don't understand why people like you insist on putting this kind of content in an incest story.. Hell, if you've lurked here for very long, you know that the majority of readers in this genre don't even like anal sex, let alone this sort of gross fetish.

As it is, you took a story tat started out quite nicely (except for the son's reversion to a 'Mommy' vocabulary) and turned it into a "2".

Eat shit

A shit story

I quick glance at your story list afterwards reveals scat is a key component of your stories, but nothing in the synopsis indicated that. This really should have been posted under Fetish. However, because this site restricts stories to one category, the tendency of incest taking precedence over other categories, and keywords only appearing after opening the story this defaulted to Incest/Taboo without any forewarning.

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Frankly, you have no one to blame but yourself for the comments. Next time, provide that info before people open the story, such as in the title or synopsis.

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You're getting the comments and scores you deserve.

Really nice believable story, was really enjoying it, but then you ruined it with the scat. Other than that there were a few minor errors but nothing serious.

You write well, but please lose the scat.

Minnie

Hurl!

You should of warned about scat at the beginning so I wouldn't have wasted time reading half a story.

To all those complaining about the scat element. Did you not read the title? I haven't read the story because the title gave it away (caca), and scat is not my thing. You have no one to blame but yourself for reading it.

There is a limit. We love incest stories. The foot fetish is fine

But scat - No.

A big piss and shit on you for your fine story!

Pathetic

What the actual fuck?

That title meant absolutely nothing to me until I reached the disclaimer. Not being a fan of scat, I made no association. I'm just grateful the disclaimer was there so I knew where to stop.

Fucking the shit out of your mother is one thing, eating it makes me want to throw up!!!

That was disgusting...incest sex is ok but that was just grose

Did someone say Spanish? While Mexicans do use this word, it is in the English dictionary.

ca-ca

[kah-kah]

noun, Baby Talk.

1. excrement; feces.

Stop blaming the author for your ignorance.

just wish she was my mom,,,,i would let her shit and piss on me and in my mouth anytime,,,,,,gorgeous,,,,,

Next time please add some zit sucking, yeast infection licking, toe cheese and earwax snacks, dandruff condiments, booger feasting, etc.

You, sir, are a walking sack o' ca-ca.

I would like to try it.

Love the bonus scene!

So hot, especially when the Mommy shits in her son's mouth. I use to always dream of that happening to me.-Eatand bemerry

My wife's shit doesn't taste that good when it is hard but I love the undigested things, grape skins, nuts, corn kernels etc. sometimes I get her to eat lots candy, then it is soft and sweet. All is good. Good story.

Fuck this SHIT story

How to give this story negative stars. I had to settle for 1 star. Why did you leave out the booger eating, the pimple sucking, the ear wax snacks, the scab chewing, etc. Please don't ever write anything again. Even better, go kill yourself. You are living breathing caca.

Not enough mom/son scat stories, exellent

I was wondering why you would name this story "MAMACACA" it = Spanish Mama shit. LOL, but sick

Love your incest scat stories. So glad I was able to do similar things with my own mother when I was a kid.

Read it or don't and shut the Fuck up

I found your story because I used the tags "incest/taboo" and "scat" so I was expecting and even looking forward to the scat portion. Whether or not you should give adequate warning or not, I'll leave to you.

Personally, I thought your story was quite good. Incest and scat fantasies turn me on so to me, this was a great combination. Rimming is an extra added attraction. Nice job.

I've seen authors write stories with horrible punctuation making for a very difficult read. Your story flowed quite well. Keep up the good work.

There is depravity and then there is sick. I only managed a few scattered words of the last several paragraphs before I quit reading. You really should think up some way to warn us if you are going to write that sort of thing. That was disgusting.

Obviously, all the complainers read past the disclaimer **** Bonus Scene Contains Scat **** and then proceeded to express their disgust. Ridiculous!

You. had a good story going up to the point where he eats his own cum. The story hit a wall from what excerpts I glanced at after that.

...and for fun. In reality, it would be a LOT different. These stories are fantasy, i.e. fiction for the reader above the last, relax and read for the fun of it!!

It is fascinating, that it doesn’t matter how many times the well-educated readers get warned in stories...

...they ignore tags and pass warnings...and then complain and lash out on things they only have themselves to blame for.

This story is really really good! Sexy and hot! Have read it many times!

And though I prefer not to eat shit myself, I can find it sexy provocative and just love analingus! So 5 stars!!

This is a good story; however, scat is not my thing. That said, whatever is acceptable between a couple is their business. As long as it does not hurt/harm a 3rd party, it is nobody's business. Live and let live.

No.

My mom is a hot as hell 39 yr old who lets me lick her ass clean after she shits. No wait. She now orders me to because she knows how much I love it . God she’s hot! If you saw that sweet ass opening up you would too. I’ve been cleaning her ass now for 5 years . Love it. I’ll write a story about it soon.

For all this mother and son drank, odd they didn't have to piss, or to drink it.