All Comments on 'Man of the House'

This may be an April Fools story and just as well. I have never read such an unlikely and crude story. Jasmine, I am a long term admirer of yours, but with your talent for erotic writing, how could you produce such rubbish? Please don't do it again. Those of us who really love you will feel very disappointed

Ditto to the previous commentor.

to heck with the previous commentators...i loved it...love the sweet side turning rough n Dom when horny..:)

A shemale with 9 inch dick ? Hardly likely; but exaggeration of the size of genitalia is part and parcel of good pornographic fiction so I give it 5 stars.

Sad fact is I have yet to find a shemale with decent sized, fully functional male equipment. Still looking and hoping however.

I loved this story. I can identify with the submissiveness of her

As always I look forward to reading your stories

Curious to see if you continue this story and which direction you go. Have not seen you go with the son/daughter dominating the daddy as of yet more than just a quick act.

I am new to this site. Thank goodness I have (at long last) discovered it. Adore your story.

That was the end of the engagement. Who would marry a liar? Why would he marry a slut that's probably full of diseases? More likely Morgan is in jail for rape. UGH!

I honestly thought this was going to be another Lesbian dom thing (I didn't notice the catefory it was in) and was honestly surprised when she had a dick. Hopefully we'll get a sequel with Daddy getting his, or the story from his POV of how he likes cock too & how his fiance finds out.

you had a nice story going. let the daughter fill in and dominate the older woman. Why go shemale out of the blue?

Having the lawyer servicing the cheerleaders sexually would have been fun!

great story .TY

Loved this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

It was great for April fools that instead of a lesbian she had a monster cock. Great story. And for the one who said he has never been with a Shemale with a 9 inch cock keep looking there are a few out there and it is great when you get one shoved up your ass

. what a truly great story really hot . can't wait read more of Hanna being used by Morgan and her friends

You never fail with your stories, I've read most of them and have yet to be disappointed. This was no exception. Keep it up.

As usual, your work never ceases to amaze me! Keep up the good work. And I hope that you will write a sequel where Hanna and her husband get used by a bunch of big dicked shemales. :)

amazing as always , i always love your fantasy inspiring stories . i love your mind . your stories are always delicious .

I love stories about big cocks and sex. It is hot. You could say a big cocked she male is the best of both worlds. As far as nine inch she male cocks go there are a few out there. William needs to look at shemale porn if he doubts that size. Mia Isabella, Dani Daniels Sabrina Suzuki, Kayla Biggs are endowed with huge cocks. Sabrina might be 11 0r 12 and she is very thick as well. Great story.

great story so hot great details ....

Keep up the a amazing work. I didn't even know you wrote the story until halfway through I realized that the style seemed oddly familiar. I especially love your shemale stories. Thumbs up I'm a huge fan.

This story would have been better with illustrations!!

Story hot af want more love these type of stories

Please right more in this series it's soooo good

Wow that was fucking awesome!

What fun :-)

Sexy story

I would love seeing more . your stories always make me feel so good

It is, indeed, nicely written but the

humiliation side really turned me off.

This is a very hot and sexy story. I was very hard and leaked a lot of pre-cum. I can see how this can lead into three some. Father, Daughter, Step Mommy etc. I would if this story continued alone these lines.

Good stuff. Bring these characters back.

Another great story by maybe the best Literotcs contributor. Her stories never fail to get me off and this one was no exception. I hope we see these characters again. Also I hope to see more tranny stories by her.

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But i think the father should have been bigger than his daughter to ensure his dominance in the home. I would love to see the daughter taking it from daddy like a slut.

Great twist for an April Fools contest.

Is this a continuation from one of your other she-male stories?

Would love to know more about Hannah, Jim & Morgan.

Have Jim & Morgan been together, so many questions unanswered.

Also What type of She-male is Morgan? She-make or hermaphrodite as I don't recall a description of Morgans breasts, balls or pussy(if she has one).

Would definitely like to see more with these characters.

as always, this is erotic and well written, with the extra twist

I wish i had a step daughter like that. Thanks for your wonderful story

Page two ends with a kiss on the back of her neck page three starts with a big cock up her arse !!!

Add to this story

Fuck that slut. A true slut.

I so love your stories even though not a big fan of incest but I get so hard reading about dominant shemales as I am obsessed with shemales because they are the best of both worlds and total top shemales are my favorite

A can see where she-males would be interesting ...to other readers. Not my style, but still 4 stars.

I guess I will never know if it is true or not. I would like to find out, but sadly...

You are an amazing erotic story teller, but I do not particularly like BDSM, so the dom language was not a turn-on (as appropriate as it was) for me. That said, your stories are always a delight, and I enjoy a good shemale story, and you are the very definition of good! Thank you and keep them cumming!

Having become worried during a conversation with the Vicar, her husband had been pacified by the pair of afro-choirbois who spit-roasted him before the Priest shot his load all over his chest as he prepared to put his wedding suit on!!!

Please write a part about the husband taking it. Never gotten off to a story like this before.

Loved it just incredible.

Good story! Another nice woman enjoying a steady dose of cum up her ass! :-)

Very hot story!!! Love the idea and writing!

Would love hear more about this family and maybe a story about the newlyweds honeymoon!!!

339. I guess “man of the house” was the surprise, but we never heard for sure . Nor did we hear if she won her case. Would like to read more about the hung daughter’s activities.

Silkstocking lover … a wonderfullly sexy story … I have enjoyed several of your stories, but this is the first to make speak up …. Thank you for sharing.

Has there been a mix up with this series and the one that starts with, "What Mom Doesn't Know Will Fuck Her"? The two story lines don't seem to match up.