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To be continued?
Cuckoldmojo
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Anonymousover 4 years agoI luv'd it. But if yer not gonna use a proofreader at least read it to yerself. You write very well for som one who's obviously never taken a course it writing, so you'll be able to see where the hiccups are. The 1 thing I would suggest is taking the time to paint a picture for the mind's eye. Like when Larry is standing over Tom, don't just refer to his cock as large, describe it in more detail. Is it long...thick...both? Talk about the viens crisscrossing the shaft, or the type of head it is. Does he hav low hanging fruit or is it a tight marble sack? Thanx for sharing, I found it very hot! The premise is extremely taboo and in turn VERY erotic. Overall thumbs up.
Anonymousover 5 years agoLoved your story only wish It could have been ME I would love to be fucked like that. Im not gay but it sounds so good to try
Anonymousalmost 7 years agooh to be taken control of candy selma holes, candysl@hotmail.com
Anonymousover 8 years agoI cannot believe that I have just wasted good time reading or should I say trying to read this " story". Did you even make it past the fifth grade?The idea is fine but the events happen way too quickly for the imagination to try and make it into reality in ones mind. And the " pink drug"? Really?
Do you have spell check turned on on your computer? If not, please do so before you attempt to write anything else along with taking a good English class.
In the meantime , Take this piece of shit and throw it in the garbage.
