All Comments on 'Man With The Crooked Smile Ch. 02'

i love this story, i would like to see more stories about the characters. please continue

Please continue, I'd love to see what happens next for this couple.

i hope you finish this story its so good and i love both the characters and the storyline....great writing. though i wouldnt protest if you made them a bit longer :D

I really hope tha tyou will continue.

It really is quite good.

You have a very good beginning and please do continue...

Lovely story and I hope that your alright.

I think this is your best story; it's sweet and erotic at the same time. And plus there is this sense of something forbidden and naughty which is very exciting. I really hope you will come back and write some more :)

What can be said, except MOOOORE !! It's already a steaming love story, and I hope, will carry on being a happy one.

Oh, please can we have Chpt. 3 already ?