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All Comments on 'Manhattan Bigmouth'

by lionel_collins

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jerrie1946jerrie1946about 17 years ago
Very Interesting

I really enjoyed your characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AAAAAAAAAAARGH

I really enjoy your stories but the constant use of commas and "like" and "sort of" spoiled it.

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

complete utter rubbish

DodgeES1998DodgeES1998over 11 years ago
WORDS

Lose all the outlandish words, and use everyday, non-hoodlum, language,, and add another chapter, if in fact, this story is going anywhere

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