All Comments on 'Manhattan'

I loved the disillusionment, the confusion of the character, of not expecting anything more than a cheap thrill of what is to become a life changing slice of time. Your story has hidden depths.

Absoutely adored your story...

Excellent. Articulate and erotic, and that's a nice combination.

Your flair for writing is beautiful. I love the way you described the emotions, sensations, places, and people. Your words let the reader experience that character's life as if being inside his head, seeing and feeling all that he saw and felt, first hand. A fascinating perspective.

The plot was excellent and to the point. Very keen insight.

Thank you!

Every now and then, I encounter a genuine writer here on Literotica. Thank you.

I love the way you wrote this story. I haven't read anything else by you, but I'm going to check if you've posted any more. The way you use words to describe emotions is just wonderful. Matter of fact..words fail to describe. Loved it. Congratulations, honestly.

The story had a flavor I would never have expected and the transition was as beautiful as the realization of the changes in every one

Beautiful, exquisitely well-crafted writing, and a wonderful story line to match, a jewel of simplicity and depth. Simply gorgeous.

I only wish that all of Literotica were like this. PLEASE submit more stories, although it's hard to imagine topping this one.

It is rare to find such a combination of hard-bitten prose mixed in with equal doses of humor and tenderness. Extremely well written, thoughtful eroticism.

You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews (Blast from the Past!) in the Author's Hangout.

I really loved this story, it was refreshing and very well written.

I have always known that major cities have personality...a soul created by those that live within it. Manhattan is a lovely place to visit. Hot, steamy, impetuous, sultry.