All Comments on 'Manly Persuasion Ch. 01'

by Ryan Carlyle

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Jasonh007Jasonh007about 6 years ago
Very hot

I enjoyed the story a lot! The gradual, but not too slow buildup was great! Fuel for the fantasy indeed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
hot hot hot

Great story. Really enjoyed the build up. I can't wait to read the additional chapters when they engage in mutual sexual exploration.

PG564EPG564Eabout 6 years ago
Terrific Story!

Very well written and carefully plotted. Very sensuous progression. Connor's restraint was superhuman. Javier was clay in his hands, then in his mouth. Really believable and aroused me greatly.

Word pictures of the sex was remarkable. Please write more!!!

Ryan CarlyleRyan Carlyleabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thank You

I am glad all of you enjoyed it. This is a true story, based on what happened to a friend of mine. Part 2 is out and Part 3 (the final part) is already submitted. You may be surprised by Part 3 and the ending.

I do not write anymore, and this is one of my older stories that I am re-posting.

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it so far!

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