All Comments on 'Mannequin Demo'

by EroticApe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MORE PLEASE!

I am definitely going to need a follow up with this! Please please add more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
good story

adding the anal with ass to mouth was great. would love a sequel; of course the Nikki model doll requires extesive testing oif all 3 holes, with DP, 3P. For comparison, the testing requires that Nikki be DPed, 3Ped multiple times as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
great story

I liked reading about Nikki in the story. Don't know how ticklish Nikki is but a model with that reaction would be cute. It was a cute story overall

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Idea for sequal

Maybe have her mixed up for one of the dolls during a release party, so more people, maybe toys involved. Great story though.

MultipleOrgasmManMultipleOrgasmManover 5 years ago
Perfect!!

I loved your descriptions of Nikki’s thoughts while always keeping her focus as a mannequin. I laughed when she came alive both times. I could just see his reaction by your description. Looking forward to reading the sequel.

Marklynda2Marklynda210 months ago

What some folks will do to make a deal! A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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