All Comments on 'Mannequin X'

Good story; thanks for writing and sharing! Suggestions for a sequel (feel free to use if you want): to make sure that the mannequin Mary is the same as the real thing for sex, every man in the company plus their male friends, plus volunteers, fuck Mary and her mannequin in the pussy, mouth, and ass multiple times, during the development product testing stage. During development, every one of her male coworkers fucks her ass every day, and she does ass to mouth for them. Then during 3 weeks of testing, 15 men per day get to fuck mary in all holes, with ass to mouth. All sex is bareback and come inside. Much of it is filmed for instructional and sales videos. the sex includes DP and 3P of Mary, multiple per day. .

Wrong place...this really out to be reluctance/non-consent.

It's also highly abusive, and I would have though so ten years ago as well.

33% exhibitionism

33% reluctance

33% Mind Control

with a good touch of humor in it!

So, the category is correct.

Although I usually like stories more rough,

with more of shyness, I love Mary's story.

Thanks @AnonymousPerv for this moment.

... and for all your stories.

You totally earned your 5-star rating on this one. It was a unique idea and the characters had a lot of depth to them.

I really enjoyed it and would like to hear more of Mary's adventures as a mannequin with her creepy boss, manipulative boss.

I'm not that big a fan of 5-inch aureoles (or however you spell that).

Personally, I would consider Fetish to be more appropriate, but the current category marginally makes sense I guess. Some of these stories are hard to place. I've not really read any stories in NonConsent, but this definitely doesn't seem like it'd fit there, she could have stopped it at any time. Though, if there was an "All part of the job" category this would fit there. There's a ton of work related stories that otherwise tend to cross category boundaries.

If you're doing an ENF story, you need to emphasize the EMBARRASSED in ENF. She needs to be mortified at the idea of being naked in front of other people for her to be embarrassed, but if she's mortified at the idea, you then need to have a compelling reason why she would do it. In this case, she just folded with a few words. So what I read from that is, she's not actually that embarrassed, except the author keeps trying to pretend she is. Just doesn't quite click.

It does have some non-consent elements to it, but I liked how Bill handled it once everyone was gone. Pretty great concept, pretty great read!

These reluctant type stories are always so tasty.