All Comments on 'Man's Best Friend Ch. 01'

Too fast into the sex for me to consider this romance. Erotic Couplings is a better fit for this.

Point taken, but as the story develops in future chapters, I believe that romance is the best overall category for it. As with all relationships, there are other, sometimes darker, themes, too, but romance always wins out!

I think the Anon and the author are right. Sex has developed too quickly and soon, but I also see an approaching romance. I also see dark secrets that have not been revealed (or is it just my imagination?). I think there can be a good story here, as long as a correct balance is achieved.

I think the secret of a great romance is to avoid explicit sex as much as possible.

Particularly I consider that sex is a small part of the romance, it is necessary to avoid that the romance is a small part of the sex.

5 * for you and thank you for sharing your work.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

....I loved it!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!

I gave it a 5* I think it (the quick sex) is plausible enough for a story. I am going to look for additional chapters as time moves along. A great start I think. It will be interesting to see how the quick sex affects the further story development of this romance. Creatively different from most romance stories.

Don't leave me hanging now and have fun with your adventure.

And please don't take the critics too seriously, they aren't paying for your efforts.

Very promising characters very early on. I am intrigued. 5 stars.

I disagree with those who have criticized the pace. She stumbles upon him while trespassing on his property with her dog. He invites her to stay as there is a strong attraction between them. They share a skinny dip...two lonely souls whose lives are each devoid of a loving partner, and each of them yearns to fill that void. Ok, that all makes sense, so why wait? You're naked, alone in a pool, and hearts are beating fast.

I liked it!

Great start to this story!

Out of character is an interesting way to start