All Comments on 'Manticore and a Half'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Maid costume

I want to read the story of that encounter. I love these two characters. Her playful and strong. Him a smartass with caring side. They compliment each other well, and make me want to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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Please, Please, Please, add more chapters to the story. The set up is unique, the story is creative, and the characters are so awesome! I loved every second of it, but it ended so abruptly.

Despite neither of them admitting it, they're in a relationship and I am interested in seeing where it is going to go. Please add another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Any one who has read this

Can probably very well agree that we want more

ArkusRuksulArkusRuksulalmost 7 years ago
Very Well Done!

I love the chemistry between the characters, and the way you write how Jenna uses her body, very creative. If you're inclined to write more, I'd read more.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[17.11.22]

Uber Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!

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Thanks for reading my stories! I don't post as consistently here, but if you're looking for the rest of my stories, refer to https://pastebin.com/dvGk9SEJ. If you are curious as to what sort of erotica things I enjoy (and therefore will most likely be writing about): -Multiar...