All Comments on 'Manufactured Bliss Ch. 01'

Word to the wise a lot of people don't want to read about homosexualiy. Most writers put a warning before the story I suggest you do the same.

I enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing it with us.

A really good start

I liked your story very much. Looking forward to the next chapter...:)

Thank you.

Please write more, love where this story is going

exciting and erotic. love it and need more

WoW, what a story.

I wish I was John from the story, & I really wish every American women acted like Rachel from the story!

5 Stars, please continue I must know what happens to John!

great story , luv more see where it goes in the future