All Comments on 'Many Forms of Capitulation'

Chuckle, darkly a bit, but deservedly. I wonder if before the end, if 5BT let herself get preggers too. But it doesn't really matter i suppose.

This one is subtle, not as outright erotica as some, and is a better story for it. Thanks for posting it!

i love this story of yours and i hope you do more

Clever but a bit rushed in my opinion. Obviously you have a great imagination, but for me there was too much technical detail and not enough actual SEX!

I liked the twist though! Thanks for sharing. ;)

Ho hum

Mmmm. Nicely done.

I hope you continue to write... in whatever genre and whatever media or forum suits you. You do have skills for the craft. I hope you grow them.