All Comments on 'Mapleton Photo Shoot'

... it could have a 5 star stroke story, but you didn't end it. so instead it is a 3 star blue ball story. Panther fan.

Definitely needs a second chapter. the story was going along really well, but i agree with the other comments. it ended too abruptly. i look forward to reading more. *smiles* Keep up the good writing.

A good start, but ends abruptly.

This is the end??? You left your reader hanging.