All Comments on 'Maragana Girl Ch. 06'

good thoughtful writing with a message. six chapters and not nary a sex sciene to mar it bravo and keep writing

It takes its own bitter time about it.

For purposes of the story, an overdose due to unexpected strength, or being cut (diluted) with some noxious powder such as kitchen scouring powder, would have had the desired dramatic effect and be a lot more credible.

This story has taken on a unique characterization of its own. It has become a very absorbing and thought provoking piece on crime and rehabilitation. Exceptionally well written.