by caligula97236
HOw I hate this story to end. However, you have offered a very concise if brief epilogue. I still wonder what happened to Malka and her boyfriend as well as to her spiritual journey. This whole saga has been most enjoyable. Thank you for writing it.
By far the best story that i have read on Literotica. Easily good enough to be a published book (better than many that I have read). Well done.
Thank you for sharing this here. It was truly a great story.
I've been following your stories, and been enjoying your other website. (BTW, to the commenter wondering what happened to Malka Chorno, Caligula's website features another story, with a glimpse of what happened to Malka and her boyfriend).
Please write more, I'm looking forward to them.
nicely. Thanks. I would have enjoyed more detail in the intervening years but - I understand that you had to end somewhere. Your imagination impresses me. Thanks again!
Its a real shame that this had to end. One of the best Stories I have read in a long time. All power to your writing hand
All the previous comments are to the point and I agree with them. A work of imagination and scope, beautifully executed. Well done!
This story to me, is the best morality play I have ever read. Now if you could just find a movie studio with the courage to film it, you just might make the world a better place. Bravo!
As Anonymous 4/14/18 said, must totally agree as to it being the best morality play, certainly on the site. Some parts are inspired, and with a flawless and adept writing style that is superb.
Thank you for an EXCELLENT tale of a fictitious European country, originally in decline but finding it's way in a modern world.
As other commentators have said this is a great morality play, but with a good dose of social and political science thrown in to stimulate the brain and enough eroticism and romantic relationships to keep the narrative flowing. What are the chances of emigrating to this extremely interesting country, I feel that I would have no problem living in this State.
Prepared, crafted and written with some considerable thought, well edited and carefully proofread meant that reading has been a real joy.