All Comments on 'Marathon Man: Breaking the Family'

very well done, a believable sexy story that turned me on very much,

she will have to have him every day from now on i am sure

can not wait for the rest of the story

Barry is an agent and a trainer? Weird and bothersome.

Well done, well written, good plot, and different sex scene. It's interesting to note that you have no knowledge of long-distance running and training. It's a minor problem, most readers will not know any more than you do.

With Malik's upbringing and education, it is interesting to see his agent's ignorance. Looking forward to number two, and the seduction of the daughter.