All Comments on 'Marcus and Lucren Take a Bath'

Glad your continuing, I'd thought you'd abandoned these characters.

I love it. You don't have to explain your choice to skip over the storytelling part, it's perfectly clear this way :) Some torture happened in between, some breaking, and now they're back to sex, that's perfectly fine, especially on Lit.

There are not enough stars to rate your story though - I simply love it, although it's short. It's a perfect fit for a quickie-mindgasm, the characters are wonderfully portrayed and your descriptions are smoking hot. Nothing to worry, very well done! :)

Mmmmmmm. s a long time Bi Crossdresser,I usually enjoy the transgender, crossdressing section. Thank goodness I had a grouse through the gay stories today. Beautiful work. Usually I enjoy dressing up en femme for guys, however, a nice warm naked guy to guy bath seems irresistibly desirable right now. Mmmmm

Anyone ??? ;-)

Joseph (Joanne)

Your story is your own. I appreciate you sharing your imagination. I wonder what would happen if a spoiled demon who gets what he wants loses his possession..., what might happen? Finders keepers and such...., the kindness of strangers..., lost but not forgotten..., or just overlooked and misunderstood. Hmmmm? It's nice to read stories that make you ponder different things.

ugh. this is so beautiful.

Rape and horrific abuse.