All Comments on 'Marcus of Duros Ch. 06'

by Hawkeye802

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samsayssamsaysover 9 years ago
Finally!!!

Excellent . That is a cliffhanger ending please don't keep us waiting another 3 1/2 months for the next chapter!!!!!!! Chris

GandolfTheWiseGandolfTheWiseover 9 years ago
Good Job - keep going

I don't know if it's possible or not, as I've never posted a story. Most minor typos are insignificant, but since this one was very important to the ending of the chapter, please see if you can correct the last sentence 'though' should be 'thought' - minor, but in that place it is quite significant.

GandolfTheWise

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