All Comments on 'Mardi Gras Madness'

That was...wow! That was, hands down, one of the finest faux-true stories I've read on here. Quite a great feat! The girls with the eyes can go in so many possible directions if you chose to continue this somehow -- or perhaps just leave it be in all her mystery.

I loved this graph especially, 'cause it's just so damn true:

"This was Mardi Gras when there were absolutely no inhibitions, before 9-11, before Iraq, before Katrina, the last real blowout before the world started turning to shit."

Just one quip: It's a "throng" of people, not "thong," although I chuckled at the apparent Freudian slip...

Well done old chap. You had me going there for a while and the reason why it was believable is that it was based on an actual event. That is how to write Faux reality.

Good job

Very hot, very imaginative. Inspiring, and kind of bitter-sweet at the end. Still, very good. Thanks for adding to my stable of fantasies.

i love the writing and the whole mood of the story... good job!!!

you dreamed this?? man i actually lived it.yrs bk tho :(

Very good, easy writing. Need more like it.