All Comments on 'Margie Gilday Ch. 02'

Can't wait for CH. 3

I can't wait to read more of this story. I'm hooked already.

You did good, very much enjoyed your story.

Unfortunately I have missed your previous work, so plan to go looking.

I must add, nicely rounded, definitely not fat.

Thankyou.

i really like this story, hoping there's more!

L

Decent story, definitely worth following up with

Theres no waste or false drama here, just good erotic writing and a likeable set of characters. Maybe the drama comes later, but I liked the spare detail and plain storytelling a lot. Im grateful and hope you keep the low-key tone.