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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Technical Knockout

Love the characters and even the situation somewhat but the description sounds like "Artificial Insemination for Dummies". The technical description, while interesting, gives time for an erection to fail with an old guy like me. "The Closer" character was the bomb; a great concept that was well filled out in the telling of the story. Stories as told by the "Closer" might prove very interesting---even to the point of telling how she gets her jollies. Well written but moves slowly due to the technical description. Great info.

Amonomous

joefeltonjoefeltonover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your feedback!

Hi Anon1,

I appreciate your feedback. We authors need our strokes too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I wonder if the nurse got turned on. 5 stars

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