All Comments on 'Marian the Librarian'

I did like it though it was hurried. It feels as though it should be in erotic couplings.

It is a very quick read, and certainly brings instant gratification. Well crafted ertoticism.

Yah. O.K. Well written but nothing to repeat. Because it was predictable, it wasn't very erotic.

Scotch is whiskey only, never anything else.

A person can be called Scottish or a Scot.

Yeah, I know. I did it that way so I could make a joke of it.

Thank you.

I had a longer version, but this seemed to fit better. I used one of my exes as a basis for Myra. There may be a sequel. Stay tuned.

This brings back memories of the first time for my wife & me.

She had told me that she was not multi-orgasmic. I had never been with a woman who wasn't, and I led her into a wonderland that night - over 30 times in the next few hours. It's been quite a ride (pun intended) over the last 40+ years!

Beware the Baptist punchbowl. Intriguing pent-up sexual energy. A few fewer cliches (rising manhood, etc.) and you've good a super little story.