All Comments on 'Marie's Journey to Hotwife Ch. 02'

The story is interesting, but could be much better with more work. You may have set her up as a slut in the first story, but if you didn't you need to show why she'd act as she did. Also make sure the action you describe is in logical progression and possible to do.

Thanks for the attempt; it takes balls to actually put your work out there for others to criticize.

thanks for writing and posting

Hot. 5

Won't be a long journey, she's already a whore.