by Tdisk
This has to be one of the best breast-fetish stories I have ever read - and that is quite a lot ;) !
Incredibly sexy and a pace which never falters - thank you for bringing us this top-class erotica.
5 8s without the slightest hesitation.
Not as sexually exciting for me. There is a sort of detachment-- perhaps like that Mary has to have to measure and work on the new corset. That said, I will certainly read on.
Number two - did you proof read it? "The laces have a lock"? Dude - laces are easily cut. This is an example of several really silly things that happened in this chapter that were both implausible and unbelievable. You've lost your way and this has degenerated into a pile of mud.