by DonnerBBQ
Please continue! I think we ALL have a fantasy to either be the husband OR the people watching!
Love the flow of the series...it has really taken a nice turn...didn't expect the BJ, but it was a nice touch. Keep it up!
Love the smooth flow. Hope there are more parts to follow.
Love reading the story and how it's progressing. Wish I was one of those watching. Looking forward to the next installlment.
Been eagerly waiting for Chapter 2... and it was worth every bit of the wait. Keep up the great story line!
Guess the question is what is Stan going to do? Hope there is a part 3
PLEASE write part 3. This was SO hot! Would love to do something like this!!!
I really liked both stories, but everyone at the office knows exactly what she's doing. The reason is that she goes further with her exhibitionism every single time. If it were accidental, sometimes she would go in with a T shirt and panties again, or T shirt and jeans, or fully clothed, and then finally something very daring again. Otherwise it's too planned out. I don't think it needs a third chapter, but it would be nice because the characters are so much fun. One idea is that one of the guys tells his girlfriend or wife, and she's incredibly turned on. She doesn't tell her husband, but when he goes out of town for a few days, she asks if she can stay at Marie's house, since she hears noises and gets scared. While there, she sees the webcam and asks if she can play a little for the guys at his office. She gets into it and decides to play a lot, maybe with Marie joining in. You could do a good job of polishing this idea and figure out how the husband finds out. Maybe they take photos of each other.
I agree that in reality, to make it seem accidental, you would have to throw in a lot of totally clothed or mostly clothed episodes. But, that would make for a long boring story. So, I like them the way they are. One other issue would be that if things are still on, the laptop screen would be active, indicating the laptop was still on. But, I can overlook that for the sake of enjoying the story. Yes, would love to see a third and fourth story.
I'm finding both of the Marie webcam stories to be extraordinarily erotic. Thank you for writing and posting them!
What can I say? This is hot. And well written and..... well, please write a chapter 3!
I am off to imagine myself in his position... I won't last long.
Thanks again D
If any of the guys at work are amoundg my 1600 chatbate followers..????
loved it! read it slowly to enjoy it over time! hope there's another part coming someday!
I don’t know how you do it. These two chapters are packaged so cleanly but I still want more. Great work!
Saw your comment on CastorbeanBen’s page and just wanted to say this is one of my favorite stories! Wish you had continued writing this masterpiece!!