All Comments on 'Marine House Movie Night'

I love this story but it looks as if it is truncated at the hottest scene! Am i right?

Thanks for the compliment. Good sex is never finished; it always provides a promise of more/better to come. This story uses the rocket-buster technique of putting the reader "up there"--to then soar free on his/her own imagination. (It's not like the story didn't already have sex scenes. *smile*)

I really appreciate your ability to write a story that avoids the omniscient view so many try for. It's a refreshing change, and I enjoyed the duality of the visitor and voyeur role the agent plays. His personality fit well, but more insight to his reaction and a little less (detachment?/clinical description? ) would have earned a 5.