All Comments on 'Marionettes'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good Start

Good start, now it's time to finish the story.

3/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I want more

Great piece that serves to arouse the reader as well as to introduce the characters. Hope we'll have chance to learn more about this trio!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Hot!!!!!!!!!!

Really liked this one!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
One hot woman

Tom should be thinking less about Louise, he's already got one hot woman in his pocket. Alex is a bomb, though getting her and Louise together would be the hell of a ride! Great story, hope there will be more about this trio soon.

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