All Comments on 'Marking Out'

Very Enjoyable, keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more of their adventures together.

Considering it doesn't say chapter 1 I'd say there won't be more.

Guess her family disowned her for not finishing her career not for having a girlfriend. At least that's what I understand.

Initially, this was planned to be a one-shot. However, positive marks have made me curious to see where people might be interested in this story going! Perhaps I'll do a bit more - charting Sigrid and Ashley's training, maybe introducing more wrestlers?

Also, to the anonymous commenter: yes, the disowning stems from the career change versus the sexual orientation. However, I certainly did picture Ashley's father and immediate family to be stuffy and restrictive.

I hope there's a sequel 😍😍😍 I loved this story

Loved your story ! Hope you'll continue the Sigrid/Ashley tale - but if not, then do some some more similarly-themed stories of mature athletic women controlling an adoring younger female submissive. Or maybe some reluctant mature women encountering equally mature strong women who then make them fully realize their hitherto submissive desires..... Anyway, thanks for a great story!

And I loved it. I wasn't sure going into this what to expect aside for some love-struck fan meeting and maybe seducing her idol, but after seeing that intense climax scene for Ashley I could see this continuing and going along with the Sigrid and Ashley storyline, maybe add some cool wrestlers as well. Just write whatever feels good to you. If it doesn't turn out as well as this first chapter that's okay if it turns out better than you'll be getting another fan (in other words, me). Keep at it and just don't lose focus. I'm loving your descriptive style.