All Comments on 'Marla and the Neighbors'

by MarlasMan

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WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 9 years ago
Sweet

Bet it's going to get sweeter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
teaser

please write somemore

petboi69petboi69about 9 years ago

got my attention - please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Don't stop! Please

Totally hooked! Please keep writing this story!

Peeperguy29Peeperguy29about 9 years ago
Marla and the neighbors

Very sexy and erotic had me very excited can't went for the next part 😉

raunchyResaraunchyResaabout 9 years ago
Nice twist

Love how you slid the 2nd neighbor in there. Sent me right over.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I certainly hope

this story is a three parter.

Well written so far, hope it continues.

Some authors have the ability to develop and write a sensual story, others do not

MarlasManMarlasManabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks...

for all the nice comments. Working on the next parts.

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