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lovemonsterlovemonsterover 16 years ago
Fantastic!

I'm looking forward to seeing how far you push with this one...another great read! - Ed ;-)

joeys-gamejoeys-gameover 16 years ago
Fuck man..

that was a hot read dude. I look forward to more of Marlas adventures, the more lewd, the better..

EnglishRoseFoxEnglishRoseFoxabout 16 years ago
Fanfriggintastic!!!

You know I love your writing style and huge talent. The way you construct your stories is incredible, and your characters are full of depth and ooze sexuality from every pore. A definite panty wetter this one!

Thankyou :) xxx

chargergirlchargergirlabout 16 years ago
wonderfully arousing,

beautifully written, and the glimpses of London were perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very erotic

just love the way the story evolves and rolls along - brilliant.

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Walking the earth, having adventures and shit. Not looking for any hook-ups, I just want to get me stories out there and have a chat on the forums.

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