All Comments on 'Marlene and Tiffany'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
WTF

Did I just read the same story three or four times over?

TheKrrakTheKrrakalmost 6 years ago
4 times?!?

Why in the world would you duplicate the same story 4 times in the submission?!?

It was an ok'ish tale, but definitely not worthy of deja vu x4.

Please fix this.

nonamesjustpunchnonamesjustpunchalmost 6 years agoAuthor
I apologize

I don't know what happened. When I previewed the story before submitting, it was only there once.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Proof read

Fucking proof read or don't bother to post. While the story was good you screwed it up by putting multiple copy's of it all together.

nonamesjustpunchnonamesjustpunchalmost 6 years agoAuthor
As I already stated

To the anonymous user who suggested I proofread or not f-ing post. I've already apologized. I'm unsure what happened to cause the multiple copies. I DID proofread before I submitted, and from what I saw before I pressed submit there was only one copy.

I thank you for your time, but not your hostility.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
OK so I was confused

by the repeats, but it’s a mistake and hardly warrants the vitriolic comments from those who’ve certainly done worse things. Promising story, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Dear PROOFREAD

Lighten up asshole!

prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
AWESOME, A Man's dream

Can't wait for the next EPISODE

x_pac6969x_pac6969almost 6 years ago
More please

What a great start. You have to continue this amazing story. 30/6/18

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