All Comments on 'Marooned'

i found this to be a very well written story..and look forward to reading more of Moondrifts work

Nice flow! Reading was interesting and well done!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

I enjoyed this story tremendously, and at the end, found myself hoping that it would continue.

I don't read this category very often, because many of the stories are so trite, but this is a nice surprise. I liked the Aborigine mother and all the details about surviving on a desert island.

The main thing I absolutely loved about this story was its sense of realism. The survival tricks, the descriptions, the dialogue... everything in it had the ring of truth, which helped immensely in suspending my disbelief. The storytelling was simply wonderful.

On the technical side of things, I noticed a number of typos and problems with quotations marks. Besides that, though, it was a thoroughly enjoyable read.

I'll be sure to look out for more stories from you, Moondrift. If your future pieces are anything like this, you will undoubtedly make quite a good name for yourself here!

Very good - well written - believable.

Thanks - and more, please!

Lukas

Wonderful, well written, erotic.

ever thought of a sequal?

this story has quickly become one of my favorites.

What a great story,must have a follow on to it,Well done

Yes..........Different island, different continent, longer period, 1944-45....absolutely the same story

Written, a story of love and survival. I'm very impressed by the skill put into this.

You could have made more of it, the subject could have run into one of your longer tales. That said it was still a good story.

I agree with the previous comment from an author whose work is some of the best. I thoroughly enjoyed your story and hated to see it end. Thanks for sharing your talent.

This is by far the best story I've read online or in print that dealt with people who are neither White nor Asian nor Indian (West or East hemisphere).

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Please consider writing an Aboriginal story for the "Novels and Novellas" category. You could used the same characters and have her take him to the Bush both for survival skills and to know his people. Given that they are both of mixed race, there would be all sorts of opportunities for conflict and personal growth.

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mamma mia

I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS.LOVED THE WAY YOU PUT IT TOGETHER. INTERESTING & LIKE ALL GREAT READS IT ,LEAVES ONE WANTING MORE... PLEASE ADD TO IT..THANK YOU FOR SHARING WITH US..

Hope someday you write a second part very sexy and romantic story.

Your descriptions; the way you captivated the fear of the unknown by the son, the outdoor wonders of the land, and the love making were stunning in the minds eye. I read this with enthusiasim and envy. An excellent peice of literature. Thanks for writing it, keep writing.

this story have a well plot but it happend too fast. story could be long and they should live that island forever with their child as the movie "blue lagoon". and other thing is mother shown her nudity too early without any refuse. mother should be refuse to get naked at first because she is the mother, son should be force her to get nude because he should be interested about female nudity. mothers nudity is not to describe properly in this story, you should describe more mothers naked body like ass, ass cheek, anus. and make some anal love also. but story is ok and hope that you should be write part 2 someday...............

YES! This story was different, covered the intimate times without being too much detailed, and did not follow any standard form of finale.

disliked the aboriginal mother. too many of the aboriginies aren't attractive in the slightest. not to mention this smug take on "whites". Fact of the matter is that this is a people that burned Australia's natural foliage to the ground, not to mention not even inventing the wheel by the time the british convicts landed.

you can poohpooh the IQ tests, but they worked for every other civilization on the planet.

VERY NICE! I enjoyed it very much--just my cup of tea. I just wished it had been much longer with a more detailed description of how they survived. If you have a longer version, let me know at jimcorey@gmail.com.

Starting to get into your stories. This was a jewel of the caliber of It Happens in War. You've moved into Favorite Author land. Hope you keep on writing.

Thanks for sharing.

One of the all time best stories.

She understands that she and Frank are mother and son. But they're also man and woman, male and female, and what each one's got between their legs complements what the other's got. Her boy's got the only cock on the island, just like she's got the only cunt. Mom brushes aside with contempt the truly dumb social restrictions of the outside world and jumps on her son. "With that she let herself slide down my body and the next moment my penis was enveloped in something soft and warm. I didn't need to be told what it was; I was penetrating mum's vagina." The kid is stunned. Nothing has ever felt nearly as good to his young penis as his own mother's vagina. Now he's hooked, and momma's laughing up her (tattered) sleeve. She's got Frank just where she wants him, way up inside her, up to his balls. The boy just cannot do without his own mother's cunt, the same cunt he came out of. He's young and super-virile, so he keeps on fucking her and mom keeps on cumming like crazy. Besides a fine fat cock the kid's got a pair of potent young balls. They never quit, so he's pumping load after load of fresh baby batter up where he was once a baby. Earth Mother gets what she's been aiming for. Her baby boy gives her a baby. Her belly swells, and Frank's young cock swells along with it. He's harder than ever before for his mother's warm wet fertile and ever-loving cunt. They get rescued, and still he keeps on fucking mom, his cock is up inside her more than it's just hanging down over his balls. They found paradise on their island and brought paradise back with them.

Society's moral edicts are often times polar opposite to the laws of nature. I loved that these two were able to shelve society's morals and embraced the marvelous wonders of nature...and the greatest of all marvels...sexual love between a MAN and a WOMAN. Great story.

What a beautifully well told story . His mother truly turned him from a dumb ass kid to man.

Mother is screaming and son is howling while having sex, ofcourse who is there to watch. They are showing their natural attributes. Though they are mother and son but they are woman and man also. The son has to perform his duty towards his mother whether it is search for food and fuel on an isolated island or making her feel good😜

Pregnancy is unavoidable as there is nothing to avoid it on that island and it goes with the theory of survival.life itself finds its own way of survival. There is a seed and there is a fertile land, so its evitable that it will sprout. When it has started once ,they copulated countless time , specially the last day they had intercourse several times like there wouldn't be another day. Possibly in all sex positions. Six month is a long period. The son got to know about each and every aspect every inch of his mothers beautiful body. He was penetrating his mother with his tongue, inserting it deep inside her, and his mother was screaming in pleasure thudding her sex upon his mouth to increase the pressure and when she came she came so hard that it took some time to get back in normal.

Ther are exploring each others body like newly married couples on honeymoon. On an isolated island mother and son are all naked and copulating like they are the last man and the last woman on earth after an apocalypse, as if they didnt copulate the human race would be extinct. Onus on them to save human race, though they are mother and son. The son has to breed his mother and she is enjoying every part of it.Giving her son best blowjobs, handjobs, oral sex. And in return what she gets pure taboo pleasure. She was so aroused that when her son gave her a marathon session of cunnilingus she came so hard that she made a high pitched squealing sound that even the birds got scared. But they knew that there is noone to watch so they are fucking like animals. And each time anyone of them approaches orgasm they hoowl like a wolf. And at the times when they both came simultaneously the sound would be deafening to the animals of the island.

I really enjoyed this story. The “marooned on a deserted island” theme and how they went about surviving was great. It was made even better with Mom leading the way and teaching her son how their ancestors had managed to live for thousands of years. I too think another chapter would be nice. But I thank the author very much for this story.

Nice story . I like it. AAAAA++++