All Comments on 'Marrying for Money Ch. 12'

Ooh, can't wait for the final chapter...

You are killing me...please hurry with the chapter.

i LOVE reading ALL of your stories! awesome! thank you so much the time and energy to think of such creative stories foru s!

please tell me Steven's not dead...i loved him the most. please just let him be knicked in the head :*(

Okay, you've gotten me hooked, and right in the middle of Finals. I knew Eliza was crazed!

Bring it on Girl!

thank goodness i can read on TONIGHT heh...i couldn't wait another day to read this one. Thank you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Oh my God, I can't believe you let them kill stephen. That is gonna destroy Trevor even if they get out of this. A shot in the head...I don't think you can work him out of that one. Ahhhh~

I've enjoyed the story so far, but this chapter is so far fetched! First, most well-off Southern homes wouldn've had someone in charge of the door, and enough servants bustling about that at least one would've been downstairs in a front room when Leanna and Eliza left. Also: if part of Eliza's motivation for wanting Trevor is money, then how on earth can she afford to hire a coach, coachman, sailors, and a ship to do her bidding? That's a hell of a lot of money. But perhaps that question will be answered in the next chapter? I hope so. Also, I know Eliza's gone off her rocker, but you think even she'd realize that the death of Trevor's brother isn't likely to endear her to him.

Fantastic story!

Nooooo why did Steven had to died:'(

Thank you for pointing out those because I am thinking of the same thing.

And really what was the point of killing Steven?

why did you kill Steven? my brain hurts