All Comments on 'Marrying Granny'

I liked the idea, it was just rushed and poorly written.

its a great concept and by all mean please don't stop but put a little back story to it and develop the characters and don't rush anything take your time with it.

This sucks. Hopefully you can do better than that.

Incest needs a lot of build up.

How and why did he end up marrying his granny?

you guys want a prequel?

you're gonna get a prequel

Fast start faster ending. The idea has a lot of potential if the characters were better defined and more fully developed. The same goes for the plot. The reader is also left wondering what happened. Another chapter is needed.

I liked the concept, incest without being wrong because they're married. Fair amount of grammar and misspelling though. Many people who write mention they have someone proof or edit. Good concept though