All Comments on 'Martha Finally Cheats'

Slow and sure buildup. Even if we know what's coming it's compelling and erotic. I can feel her passion.

Head and shoulders above everything else written on this site in a log time.

MaryAnn678

It is of course sad, but in another way also kind of amusing, that a first rate truly erotic writing yields only one comment...Could it be that the story is too embarrassing for people to openly acknowledge that they had read it - and even had good time while doing it???<P>

On the other hand, when high moral grounds, justice and judgment are the central themes, the comments reign in... It looks like when presented with a pure, 'traditional' yet very well paced and well written erotic fantasy - people kind of - don't know what to say...It's hilarious! <P>

I was wondering what is the number of readers who have read the story (and obviously have not commented, and what was the average rating to this classy story. <P>

IMO, this kind of writing should have been the 'bread and butter' of Literotica as an erotic site: seduction, fantasy, confession, a lot of sexual tension and build up (very rare), humor, a bit of intrigue, and it's a story that does not take itself too seriously - how refreshing... And yet, it's kind of a rarity...You could find similar stuff in classic erotica from the beginning of the century (the 20th, that is); 'confessions of a naughty lady', saucy and daring - with a wink...<P>

My request to you is: please write more in this style. Please do not allow yourself to be derailed by judgmental moralists (unless of course you intend to seriously put themes of questionable moral behavior at the center of your future stories). Personally, I feel that Lit. is already soaked with this kind of stories…<P>

Regarding your question to the readers, you could find my age range in my profile.

and appreciation to KOLKORE whose link led me to this perfect Loving Wives tale, and who so eloquently expresses all that needs to be said. A classy erotic story hidden away for years, such treasure. In a way I hope it stays that way, and that THEY never get to sully it with their puerile loathing. We'll keep it just between you, me and MaryAnne.(Now that sounds like the title of another hot yarn...)Oh and MaryAnne I'm going to have a look now at some of your catalogue, it looks proper enticing.Mancelt

I hope Tom is aware and has his own such distraction. And he finds a more accomodating place inbetween her sex. Oh the ways some things can get sorted out, and not necesarily to the liking if martha and the others.

Loved story.my average cock hard thinking it was my beautiful wife instead.always telling her I would like to see her sucking and enjoying big cock.not yet.

After having rode my wife for the third time this weekend, I still became aroused reading this story thinking of her straddling up and riding on a bigger cock than my average size she is accustomed to.

I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY, THE GRAPHIC PART WAS EVEN BETTER. KEEP WROTING LIKE THIS

It was a good story and glad Martha got and continues to get that big sausage. The only one I feel that is on the outside looking in is Tom, and it is a shame that Martha can hardly feel him inside her anymore. I'm sure that Tom feels the same way and Martha may find in time that she is more with Martin and less with Tom to get the full feeling of intercourse with Martin.

If meant as a stroke story,it failed miserably! A pathetic effort by a social failure.

Martha you just had to write about yourself......huh

Tom may not be the fool he is thought to be, and the knock on the door by the man in the drab suit saying, "you are served", and a third party against Martin and whatshername. Much to be said for MArtha and hopefully Tom will do much there to change her marital status and direction of her life.

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I suppose the author is trying to say that what Martha did with her next door swinging neighbors is really quite all right. Well on the one hand it is alright for the swingers to get free pussy next door to add to their fun, after all it is free and hardly at any cost to them. Martha believes that she is a slut and she probably is, more certainly she is a marriage destroyer, an adulterer, a liar someone who has destroyed her wedding vows. So I guess Laffwithme (who oddly did not write a story that was funny in the slightest) thinks this story is quite charming and even enlightening. Wrong on both counts.

Bad this. 1* !!!!!

This story over a thousand time by different authors same results same comments. Good read thanks for sharing.

when Tom finds out and kills all three of the dumb fucks and hopefully for his stupid slut wife it takes a long time. Wish could vote negative numbers.

Won't those black animals ever learn?? "1".

decent story, wasnt a huge fan of the ending but thats just my opinion. Keep writting

I'm 80 and still love to eat pussy. This married gal w/great legs & ass, comes over a lot to help me. I pay her quite well. Just the other day I gave her $400 she needed. She DID NOT ask, I just knew she had a problem. I'd pay a lot just to see her naked. At my age I still get compliments from some of the over 70's in my bldg, I'm1D23 NOT fat or gross. From the ladies. Any chance??

The beginning of a size queen who doesn't feel her husband anymore. Does he know? What happens? Damn

Oh. We have a sequel. Yeah.

Thanks for the effort.

There is a sequel to this. Very violent. Do you know the name of it?

Haven't read it but thus is one

Martha Finally Cheats Too Often

byFinishTheDamnStory©

As usual...Cheaters are never guilty of their cheating...It's always the spouse's fault...How sad can that be? And the sweet talk of the neighbours? Is she sure they are really married? This story isn't even funny...So we can't laugh with the writer...1*

Misandrist drivel

"Some people don't approve of sex just for the fun of it but Sybil and I have found it works for us” – That’s fine that you and Sybil have found that it works for YOU, has anyone asked TOM if it works for HIM?

Has Martin offered Sybil to Tom?

“then would feel guilty about thinking impure thoughts” – Of course, let’s not go to your HUSBAND with these “impure” thoughts! I’m sure there is NO chance that HE is also bored with their humdrum sex life and would like to spice things up!

fag cuck shit.

and well written. 5* One suggestion -- delete anonymous comments!

I really liked your story, the only thing I can stand is when women are portrayed as morons. Marthaś friend had told her about how Martin came dressed in just a short bathrobe and then exposed himself to her. When he did the same to her and then Sybil leaving her with Martin. Any sane person would have guessed it was a setup. She should have just excused herself till Sybil came back from wherever she was hiding. But no.!! You had to paint her as a cock hungry moron. Falling at just the sight of a cock. Maybe if you had gotten her drunk, drugged or high on something it would have made some sense. My late wife was a cock lover but it was never about size but rather a new experience. That was what would get her off. A small cock could get her of just as well as a big cock. Anyway. Hope if you write again youĺl have better sense in portraying women in a different light and not as a moron falling for the simpliest of cons.

He's just stalling for time while he hides the assets, takes out a second mortgage on the house and prepares to leave the slut. Why would he stay? She can risk her own life.

Ridiculous husband hating author.

I despise cheap, two dimensional characters both male and female.

Bad writing except for the sex was pretty good.

I enjoyed your story, and storytelling. The build-up was necessary, I thought, to let us see Martha as the sheltered woman she was. It also made the seduction seem plausible.

When I noticed the comments, I had to opine. Such a lot of complaints about Loving Wives doing what the Loving Wives category says, "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." I always struggled to understand folks reading Loving Wives category and getting upset when they get what is advertised.

For myself, I thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please keep writing.

Oh yeah, and a cheating slut.

together and setup a fuck schedule for Martin cock...

Well this author wont BTB so they may live happily ever after.

There is a dedicated group of shitheads on Literotica that down vote and leave nasty comments for cheating wife stories. Apparently, they are too obtuse to understand what fantasy is and project their own petty view of sexual fantasy onto everything they read. Erotica is fantasy dumbasses.

Hope hubby finds out and outs her with her family,friends,co-workers,etc. Life sucks enough without being married to a twat like this!

5* from me!

A great sexy story, well paced and could happen.

Cannot understand those who write negative comments, why do they bother to read these stories in the first place.

I am an older man who has had adventures like this in the past, as has my wife, it never did any harm.

I shall read more of your work with pleasure.

Not signed in at the moment but I am’guzzieathome’

Until Tom realizes the child she is carrying isn't his and he becomes the big shot jewlery salesman, after he sues his neighbors for everything they have an dumps the slut named Martha he used to love.

That's why he filed for a divorce. And that's why Martin and Sybil's house burned down one night - for no apparent reason. Stupid story.

Wonderful fullfilling story!Keep up the good work!

i almost came half way

A very intense story, well written and erotic, thanks for sharing it.

A really cute story about a cheating whore and a couple of assholes. I'll just laffatyou.

always there, always reading the stories they seem to hate, yet flock to them only to

leave their negative brainless comments. a shame. Good story. Keep them coming.

This is the original. I’m sure the new one is probably about pain, revenge, and divorce, which is obviously one way to take it. But I love this one. It gave me just what I needed to push me over the edge on a Saturday night in bed with my husband: the image of an extra-large dick being slowly shoved up my cunt.

That's the type of story that I love.

Btw, I am a tall and heavy man. In my early 50s with a larger than normal cock. Plus I have a desire (practically a fetish) for petite women. I absolutely love to get a tiny younger woman and give her her 1st chance at a real pussy stretcher.

HAHAHAHAHA!

A rather worthless slut with the morals of a whore!!!

wonderful, women need all the love they can get and variety is the spice of life, if hubby cannot oblige there are plenty of men that will.

It sucked, Just another slut story !!!!!

nice. well written.

I was Martin a few years back, I had a younger woman that lived in my apartment complex that I was able to persuade into my bed. The first time I only ate her but a few days later she returned to my apartment and I was able to complete the mission. At the time I was about 40 years old and she was about 26, married and 2 kids. She returned several times following that until I moved away, I unfortunately lost contact but have very fond memories. I am now 65 and would love to meet up with her again sometime.

Waste of time reading this bullshit

I like it and was aa little more different than most, writing could use some work but good story. 65

Poor Tom the husband, what a joke that is. I hope they get caught.

Another story where the woman will just drop everything for a huge cock... right.......