All Comments on 'Martin's Story Ch. 01'

Not hot at all, and disturbing on many levels... sorry weak sauce.

This was an imbicilic feminst fantasy.....in real life, an experience like this would make a semi normal guy into a rapist, needing revenge against all women for what his female relatives did to him.

I enjoy femdom stories but this is just to irrational Pamella is making arguments that are structurally invalid and fallacious in nature. Oddly enough thats what bothers me the most not the incest

i think your story was fab. d'nt worry abt d iditos

ur the best fantacy writer i wish u could continue clash of titans and other stories as well.. pls write more.. m a great fan of urs

Great beginning, need to add another chapter or two, and they should of tried him up naked to the dinning room table while they ate their food. Keep writing.

write more like this........

or the next part of this please!!!!!!

He needs to be put in chastity. Turn him into the sissy he is inside.

Just stop writing you idiot. All your stories are shit and disgusting,

You should continue this series

This story deserved to be continued

For real

Excessive much?