All Comments on 'Mary'

not a bad story at all. but the content seemed a bit dry reading it. still a good read though

Anon clearly didn't read Kim first. I don't think this really stands alone as a read but it is a superb sequel. I enjoy the polyamorous theme and have written elsewhere on it. Many thanks. I'm looking forward to reading your other work.

sex-sessions

INSTEAD OF

Lovemaking

Makes a lot of difference, as it is no synonym

Thats your fantasy??!! Your dream is only for idiots who dream about male supremacy!!!

Of course, no matter what is posted in the "loving wives" category, unless it is just happy missionary sexual activity between happily married people, the idiots like the last poster WILL come in and post hateful comments.

Real life is not like that, and situations happen all the time, the rule rather than the exception. This is true in the animal kingdom, and true of human beings.

This tale relates how the lady realizes and accepts herself, the way she is, and she accepts her mate, the way he is.

That simple, it rings true, happens more often than not.

Thus we see scandal daily in the news, as well known people get caught. Then we see the rest of you, gloating at the spicy news, talking about how TERRIBLE that is...?

When MOST of you were recently doing... the EXACT SAME THING!

In real life the wife doesn't get seduced by the husband's mistress or enter a mormon marriage without being born into a mormon family. Take that however you want, it's just mediocre smut.

Interesting story and a good continuation of the tale you started in Kim. But I think you made a mistake in submitting it in LW. Unfortunately it won’t result in a score that reflects its true value

To begin with, I enjoyed the story.

The actual name of Josh's post-high school education is Johns Hopkins University. Yes, his first name was Johns, with the "s" at the end. (I am a JHU alumnus.)

Congrats to the writer!

This story is well written, lovely, sexy and so enjoyable.

Please keep writing more stories like that!

Lovely,

KP

Smoothly delivered and well thought out sex festival. Plenty of amusing comments.

I disagree with comments saying it

doesn't belong in LW. For me it

definitely does.

Most of the story Mary was a true

lowing wife.

Until she started cheating.

Spicing up your love life, in marriage,

is a good thing.

Doing it behind your spouse's back isn't!

Even though there was talk of adding partners,

this was still cheating.

The writer turned this wonderful wife into

a dishonest wife.

A pity.

3 stars from me.

Dave and Kim were already lovers. This ending tries to let everyone have their cake and eat it too. Let's hope they don't choke on it.

Can't imagine what a sequel would look like. So many possibilities! Obviously Kim will have his child. Other than that its wide open.

Thank you for so elequently showing that being a hotwife can mean many beautiful things, and not simply engaging in humiliation and the like. This is a splendid read.

If there is a third story. The one where the wife realized her husband was a cheater and Kim made her a fool. HA, HA, Ha, Ha, ha.....

AMerryman

P.S. Never happen.

Real Loving Wife story. Yes perhaps some cheating but it happens. 5 stars.

Seriously now. How about a consequences chapter.

Mary finds out he cheated and she was duped. I would think that gives her pause. At least in the realization of her standing among the three..

AMerryman

Very nice continuation- there was worry that Mary would'nt be enough to keep her husband after his fling at the reunion, but things worked out. Kind of was hoping Mary would open up to other men, but the FMF thing is perfectly fine. A feel good story.

Thought this was going to.be a decent story ,but just same old bull.

I expected this to be a disaster for Dave, especially when Kim visited California. Happily it seemed to turn out OK.

As far as the anon. comment about FMF threesomes, yes it does happen real life, but the participants keep it low-key and don't brag and talk about their relationship.

Apparently geeks rule 🤣

Wonderful. I enjoyed reading it. I didn't find it sexually arousing (my usual reason to go to literotica), but the fun of reading a well-written, plausible and loving story more than made up for it. I have included the author's link in my secret stash of links so that I can come back and read more stories.